Editor writing

At school we have been making leters to the editor.  My leter was about changing greymouth to make it better.  heres my letter.

Dear Editor

Greymouth needs to change.  Right now Greymouth is just a small town like any other. What's going to make people come? We should be making Greymouth more exciting like getting new attractions and shops. We need get a proper museum and a little fun park like the one in Nelson Tahunanui,  it has bumper boats a water slide and a super slide.  Greymouth needs new shops we could even get a mall like in Christchurch.  We could get an EB games, Sony, Whitcoulls and Kmart this would help Greymouth improve with people coming to here to shop.  

Greymouth could get a lot more money if it got more interesting attractions for visitors, like Shantytown.  A lot more visitors would come here and be interested in doing new things.  Greymouth really needs new designs for some of the buildings.  The buildings have to be repainted and some of them can get paintings, like the train art in the tunnel.  We need to make Greymouth more colorful. Greymouth must get some little info booths that show you some cool things to do in Greymouth.  Surely we will be able to get some pamphlets about Greymouth in stores.  If we do these things Greymouth will get properly known in NZ instead of it being one of those tiny drive-through towns.

Joel          

Year 8 Student, Paroa School.